Assignment 22A – Elevator Pitch No. 3
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=blba3pellMU
Reflection from No. 2: I did not receive much feedback from my last pitch. However, I noticed that sunlight works better for the quality of videos, so I decided to make my elevator pitch earlier than before. I also noticed that I need to work better in my gestures and how fast I speak. I need my customers to understand and listen my ideas instead of boring them. A good feedback I received, was that I should mention a link or a website at the end of the video in order to have my customers go there.
What I changed: I tried to be more engaging and present in my pitch, since last time I spoke too slow. Moreover, I specified my target market and put a lamp close to my face to have more light. I tried to stand further from the camera and I also used formal clothes.
What I changed: I tried to be more engaging and present in my pitch, since last time I spoke too slow. Moreover, I specified my target market and put a lamp close to my face to have more light. I tried to stand further from the camera and I also used formal clothes.
Hey Jazmin,
ReplyDeleteI think that your pitch is very engaging. I did notice at the end that you kind of got a little robotic with your reading. I am assuming it is because you started reading of a script. Which is not bad. I find that it is a great way to get my own thought in order before you try and record. I even do this as well and have gotten comments on it. Overall you did a great job and maybe a few more practices before the finally video would really help with know what you want to say and being able to say it more fluidly.
Your pitch was clearly defined. Only critic I have is it sounded a bit robotic. I suggest being more lively and not reading from a script. That makes your pitch more fluid and engaging.
ReplyDeleteHi Jazmin, I think you did a great job with your pitch. Everything seems right and your enthusiasm is great in the video. I think you did a great job and everything seemed well.
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